Hello there ladies and gentlemen! This is Azu here and I'm back with another Haunting Hour review! So recently, I've been working on my Haunting Hour pasta and another pasta. For the most part, I've been correcting errors that I didn't catch the first time and adding content to both stories. For the longest time, I've struggled with figuring out proper grammar when it comes to dialouge. For example, the most common dialouge mistake I would make is ("Look in the sky! It's a robot eagle shooting lazers out of its eyes!" Said Billy.) This sentence is incorrect because unless the word after the dialouge is a name, it shouldn't be capitalized.

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