Hey guys, it's Azu here and chapter 12 is completed and I'm just chugging along with this story.
This is the chapter where things start to get a bit more intense for Kristy and her family. You see, in chapter 7, Kristy's mother had promised her daughter that when the father got home, they would have a big celebration to commemorate their first day as residents in Japan. In this chapter, the celebration gets underway. But then, someone or something causes a total ruckus in the kitchen and by the time the family goes to see what it is, the perpetrator has escaped and the kitchen is left in ruin.
One of the things that this part may imply is that when the legend of the Samurai Girl is told out loud, as shown earlier in the story where Kristy's new friend Hotaka tells said legend aloud, bad things will happen much like in the legend of Tomino's Hell. I don't know if that will be a really good idea or something quite stupid. I guess that's up to the reader to decide. If you think that should be an established rule or not, let me know in the comments below.
Chapter 13 is being worked on right now but I haven't been able to add much to it since I've been a bit busy lately. Hopefully I can find some time to work on it. I have a pastebin link avaliable for anyone who wants to take a look at what I have for chapter 13 so far.
Here is the link: http://pastebin.com/J2U4XGad
If there are any changes or improvements that can be made to the beginning of the chapter, let me know.