So I'm writing this short creepy pasta and I'm not going to copy and paste the whole thing into this post but I really can't decide which of the two terms would have a better effect.
Vomit surged up from his stomach and flowed out of his mouth, pooling around hisconvulsing/ now lifeless body.
The guy's gonna die but if I write convulsing then I have to drag it out a bit. Glad to hear any feedback.Read more >
Why aren'r there more mindfuck CreepyPastas? I do like some of the creepy ones. By sometimes I just want to read one that really makes me question parts of my life.Read more >