I'm glad to know that you are willing to hear me out. It's not often that you find someone open enough to receive criticism about their work. With that said, most, if not all, of what I have to say will be negative. It should, considering I called your story the "worst creepypasta I ever read". I am not just here to bash however, I will be giving some constructive advice as well. Since this will be pretty lengthy, I will divide it into sections in order to keep the flow consistent.
Section 1: Pumped for Fruit and Dairy
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First, an introduction. No doubt, you'd want to know who I am. My name is Connor, and I am 21. I have been into the horror genre for as long as I can remember. Ghost stories, urban legends, video…