Hello again. Here are some things I learned from that lovely experience I had today. Thanks again to the people who gave me the constructive criticism. Here they are.

1. Don’t be passive or detached 2. Don’t rush 3. Build tension 4. Develop a sense of urgency 5. Make sure that events amount to something 6. Make sure that the situation makes sense 7. Make the ending satisfying 8. Use the Writer’s Workshop 9. Don’t be discouraged 10. Put more time into it

Got it.

P.S. I got to keep the badge I earned for the deleted one, so no harm done :) And nobody said anything about the grammar, so I guess that's something I did right. Good to know all that review in class payed off.