The alternate version of me on Blahcrap read my Riff of the story "Rae the Killer", and decided such an awesome concept shouldn't go to waste. So, he rewrote the story. As it stands now, it's part one, but if enough people like it and want more, he's more than happy to oblige. I'm not going to post the story itself here, just a link:

(By the way, I am so Riffing this)

What do you think? Is this version better? Worse? Do you wish that version of me and I would be killed by a cyborg cannibal serial killer? Leave your thoughts in the comments below, and on the comments of the story itself.