So, I have written a new story to replace my oh-so unsuccessfull one. I feel really bad for putting out such a horrible pasta as that other one turned out. Whoever deleted it, thank you. (Seriously, I'm not being sarcastic. I was actually wishing for it to be deleted.) Anyways, I'm I wrote a new one called The Strange Face In The Mirror and I've re-read it 10 times and edited before posting. So, I'm pretty sure it's great.
If you want to review any of my stories, go ahead and be my guest. I love constructive criticism so, please, be detailed. (: