Just thought I'd share the first bad review of my novella Pasta Noir: Dames, Slugs and the Hatchetman.  It was reviewed by PUMPED4FRUIT&DAIRY, a Freestyle Challenge finalist and his friend who prefers to remain anonymous.  Here is the review blog Pasta Noir, Dames, Slugs and the Hatchetman: Review.  Sort of felt like a roast it was so harsh.  Enjoy.