Hey Creeps,

Black here again.  I'm halfway done with my latest story in the writers workshop.  If you are familiar with my work, you know that I dont' write all the time but when I do, I prefer Dos equis.... Just kiddng.  Couldn't resist.  So, I'd like some feedback.  Mind you, no it's not complete.  I'd like to have some opinions on what I have so far.  I know where I want to take this and how I want to end it. 

With work lately, I'm lucky to have time to write one night a week so this is taking a bit longer to pen out.  But I should have some time this weekend.

I await your thoughts everyone.  Thanks.  Link Below: