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  • Hello, 

    I'm new here and I noticed everything is different from the Italian Wiki, so there are still few things I have to learn even after reading the rules etc.

    My story, wich was already added to the Italian Wiki, was marked for review. Does that mean a staff member is going to check It? Help?

    Here s the story : 

    Things in the Dark

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    • If it's marked for review, then it's likely a staff member will take a look at it at some point. However, if you correct whatever problems it has, then the staff member will remove that tag, assuming the content of the story is acceptable by the standards of the wiki.

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    • Thank you for the help

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    • You have to work on your English. 

      Also, "I am the monster" twist usually does not work, try to make it seem more natural somehow. 

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    • Yes I know , and as said before in my post and to other comments the problem comes from the fact that translating from italian to English is more difficult than writing in English or translating from it. However you are right, the plot twist is somehow a cliché. But to be honest, I think this was the only end I could gave to the story since the entity followed the guys from far away for all the time without them realizing. Thank you for the feedback, I'll try to correct the grammar of this pasta as soon as possible; also probably next time I am going to write in English only to avoid any mistake(or the majority of them).

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    • Since the link has been tooken down, you might want to consider moving the story to this page.

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    • NedWolfkin wrote: Since the link has been tooken down, you might want to consider moving the story to this page.

      Fixed it, the title was capitalized improperly so it redlinked when it was re-titled.

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    • No problem

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