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  • Of Dogs and Monsters
    by ToxicAvarice

    A simple game of cat and mouse takes an unexpected twist.
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    • HopelessNightOwl
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      fixed
      06:03, October 29, 2018
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    • Oh I remember this from before, definitely read it some time.
      I liked it the first time... it's creepy and somewhat unique, yet still throws you back to some games and movies. So that's nice. Like the original bio weapon thingy you came up with. 

      One thing though, you should switch the "things" and "growths" from qouted on qoute to italic font or something, make it appear more organic in the text. Also, could use "torso" instead of "chest and tummy". 

      Overall, not bad, at all. 

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    • I think it's fixed. 

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    • Thanks for correcting that.

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