Got anything that might narrow it down some? A line you remembered, something that might stand out in the premise? Right now it seems like a used topic so a little more to differentiate might help some.

The prose was written okay but the dialogue was very unconvincingly written and poorly punctuated.

Hmm, it might have been deleted if that was the case as our quality standards have changed a bit from the past. Any specifics you can remember (character name, cheesy dialogue line, something about the author's name, etc.)?

I don't recall there being an author's name and I don't think any of the characters were named, though for some reason I get the idea that the guy's name was Jack, it was written either first or second person, and it was fairly short. There was this whole thing about how, um, something like "the worst fear is that the people you care about don't care about you" and the protagonist runs to her friend, and they hug for a second, but then the friend isn't reacting normally he's just standing there, and she looks up, and he's like "something something something, I'm really a demon, I don't even care about you" and then he kills her. And I think it was mentioned at some point that they were friends since childhood but I won't vouch on it.

Hmm, I'm not really turning up anything. The Seer of Possibilities has a character named Jack and a betrayal near the end, but it doesn't really meet the other points you laid out so it's likely not that (it's more well-written and properly punctuated). Sorry I couldn't be any more of a help to you. Feel free to let me know if you remember anything else or actually find it. Have a good one.

Thanks, and you. I'll keep trying to remember something about it.