History: The Kind Old Man with a Bike Path in His Yard

23 July 2014

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24 April 2014

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9 April 2014

• curprev 17:1217:12, 9 April 2014‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,498 bytes +17‎ missed a couple of typos Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 17:1117:11, 9 April 2014‎ エル・ローライト talk contribs‎ m 5,481 bytes −67‎ Undid revision 741365 by エル・ローライト (talk)
• curprev 17:1117:11, 9 April 2014‎ エル・ローライト talk contribs‎ m 5,548 bytes +67‎ Reverted edits by Sloopernicus (talk | block) to last version by Quality Control
• curprev 17:0817:08, 9 April 2014‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,481 bytes −67‎ Redid a few sentences Tag: Visual edit

13 March 2014

• curprev 00:0000:00, 13 March 2014‎ Quality Control talk contribs‎ 5,548 bytes −15‎ Purging Category:OC - bot

4 March 2014

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18 November 2013

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7 September 2013

• curprev 06:1606:16, 7 September 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,590 bytes +35‎ Split up a few of the paragraphs.

3 September 2013

• curprev 20:5820:58, 3 September 2013‎ Tacobrain21 talk contribs‎ 5,555 bytes +26‎ Adding categories

17 August 2013

• curprev 04:4304:43, 17 August 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,529 bytes −16‎ noticed a few typos I missed :/
• curprev 04:3604:36, 17 August 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,545 bytes +163‎ changed a few sentences around, broke up the paragraphs, added a few extra lines to the story to give it a little more detail

13 August 2013

• curprev 03:4603:46, 13 August 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,382 bytes −1‎ Missed a sentence I meant to edit.
• curprev 03:4003:40, 13 August 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,383 bytes +22‎ Got rid of parts that were "passive voice". Moved the man's picture so it shows up after the paragraph introducing him, and got rid of a "everything went black" cliche.

18 June 2013

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17 June 2013

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16 June 2013

• curprev 03:2303:23, 16 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,273 bytes −6‎ >:| Wall of text elimination!
• curprev 03:1603:16, 16 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,279 bytes −21‎ another revision to improve the readability.

15 June 2013

• curprev 19:5519:55, 15 June 2013‎ LOLSKELETONS talk contribs‎ 5,300 bytes +2‎ No edit summary
• curprev 19:4819:48, 15 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,298 bytes +20‎ final edit to the story
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• curprev 17:4117:41, 15 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,267 bytes +2‎ Didn't realize my last three paragraphs clumped together into a mini-wall of text. :/
• curprev 17:0417:04, 15 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ m 5,265 bytes −23‎ Posted on facebook and got recommendations to smooth out the story. So I made those minor edits here as well.
• curprev 13:2913:29, 15 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,288 bytes +9‎ Noticed a few instances were present tense actions snuck into this past tense story.
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• curprev 12:1312:13, 15 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,298 bytes +45‎ Couldn't sleep. Ran the story through a grammar checker (which I should have done in the first place :/) and fixed some errors and reworded a few sentences. Also added a picture of our kind old friend. :)
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• curprev 08:2008:20, 15 June 2013‎ Sloopernicus talk contribs‎ 5,314 bytes +5,314‎ Created page with "One day a boy and his little sister were walking home from school. They took their usual shortcut through the woods; they especially enjoyed taking this route because it cut ..."