I'm surprised im the first to comment on this. Amazing story, well written and scary! kinda had that classic Stephen King short story feel. I loved it :) Atropina 20:54, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Very good story, One of the best scary-short stories I've read in my entire life! 10/10 --R3Lax1 22:12, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This pasta truly deserves more popularity 10/10 Loner6480 (talk)

Awesome! Sorta reminds me of Lovecraft's The Shadow Over Innsmouth. I always love stories about evil cults. TongueOfSathan (talk) 03:13, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome. just pure awsome.Manus812 (talk) 01:30, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Very good in story, just not scary, also rereading the begginging i had to question how long it took lomard to find robert since it said he had been going to the same bar for years. Did he not try that hard or was robert that good at hiding till the end of the story? Anyways great story 5/5 Luigi01080 (talk) 00:44, December 23, 2012 (UTC)

Are you serious? This story was fucking terrible. First, half the "big words" are used completely incorrectly, second the sentences are almost universally awkward as fuck, and third, the plot is just entirely stupid once it's revealed. When he learned he could fucking MELT the badguy by touching him, why the fuck didn't he just Fucking Melt Him when the badguy was on the ropes with his mask/face torn off? So fucking dumb. And that's just the most obvious stupid plot point. 22:51, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Would Read Again

I wasn't that much scared, as I was wanting more from the story. I was sort of dissapointed that Robert didn't look more into this godess of theirs. I'm sitting here, wondering exactly how this final encounter will take place...

FullOnFedora (talk) 17:26, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Very good story that I think could be made into an intriguing short film by someone with some talent. 10/10, I'd say, it was very good.

One of the best Stories I've read in a while, really underated for it's level. Hyperrealisticman (talk) 02:48, June 21, 2013 (UTC)


9.5/10 - CrashingCymbal (talk) 17:25, July 1, 2013 (UTC)

Easily one of my favorites, not all that svary but man was it a good read. Anyone else think this should be made into a movie?NavyGM92 (talk) 05:35, July 30, 2013 (UTC)