Liked it very much, did some grammar fixes on it but al together i ejoyed it -I- Nyarlathotep -I- 22:39, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I was just about to fix it up too. :P

Good concept on the Slender children.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Jacob-sama (talk • contribs). Please remember to sign and date your talk page posts by typing four tildes (~~~~).

sounds like the end of my pasta