when i pressed start, the Sky darkened, the water turned red, the Island was gone, the title emblem was rusted and Sonic and Scootaloo's eyes were pitch black and bleeding with 2 glowing red dots staring RIGHT AT ME. I thought it was a glitch and proceeded with the game. This is the dumbest thing i've read all week. Devincooper64 (talk) 00:38, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ughh.. every cliche in the book, bad grammar, MS Paint image, horrible plot. 2/10. What was wrong with this story? The author wrote it with absolutely no originality. Plus, doing it as a crossover with Sonic was not a good idea. Once again two fandoms that are not are suppose to clash. I feel that the author took 15 minutes to write this without editing it. Sloshedtrain (talk) (contribs) 00:47, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

I like the story, release the Kraken! FoxZilla (talk) 01:02, September 23, 2012 (UTC) FoxZilla September 22, 2012