I wouldn't call it the best pasta but it was okay. One thing though is that red eyes, bleeding eyes, no eyes, etc. are all considered VERY cliché and are not liked in this site. There are a few grammical errors, but other than that, it was a decent pasta. 6.5/10 The King of Waffles 21:41, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reply to "Decent."
Well, this, as said, is a sequel to Sonic.exe, where Sonic simply has the bloody eyes and I agree with you that that was a bit cliché. Thats why Sally.exe and the other corrupted characters are different.
By the way, as this is much of a Sonsal creepypasta, I'll make it up to you by making an AMY.EXE soon enough.
Look forward to it. >83
Way to copy a creepypasta video! about 80% of this story is stolen directly from this video:
The only thing different is you replaced Sonic with other characters!
The giant silver ring, The special zone, The speed monitor zone, The screen closing in on Sonic, etc.
If you were to just use some original content, I would say this is a decent fan-sequel.
Man there should really be an AMY.exe. I hope.
Wait a minute...
This sounds familiar...
Doesn't this story seem like it was based that videoon youtube I found?
I don't know... something about it seems... connected....
Update: Turns out it was... Somebody already figured that out... T.T
We don't truly know who's good nor evil. It's only what the reasons ae for thier actions that determine who they are... 21:48, December 2, 2012 (UTC)
They should make a amy exe becuase the picture look awesome but make her a crazy killer like sonic that will be the best creepypasta ever.
I personally enjoyed this one more than Sonic.EXE, despite the various cliches in it. While this one isn't as original, it's more imaginitive with the scene from the show being used, among other things, and the characters dying in different ways other than just being killed by Sonic. I actually looked up that episode, and i can't watch it without thinking about this. So, i personally would give this a 6.5/10 for just a standalone creepypasta, but an 8/10 as a sequel. One question though: why would your parents despise you for buying the sally plush?
This may well be the worst thing anyone has ever done.
There is no evidence of proof-reading, the story makes literally no sense, and it's way WAAAYY too long.
Congratulations on making Sonic.exe look good!