Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! This seems rather fake to me! i have that feeling alot..............Raidenist: Hail The God of Thunder! 19:20, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well it is an experience, and it is real. So there.

I'll count your resentments..................Raidenist: Hail The God of Thunder! 18:56, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll admit it to being fake. Do you think it's well made?

It's ok.

It's not the greatest pasta, but it's ok. At least it's not a troll pasta.

It's decent, but it could use some work. So many creepypasta deal with "BLOOD ALL OVER EVERYTHING LOLWUT" it kind of annoys me. Ponyo Fan 21:56, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

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Needs work. It's far too short, and the blood everywhere is a bit of a sad excuse for a plot moment; it happens in nearly every Lost Episode, and even in pastas that aren't! In addition...

"This was a real experience, and for all of you who think, "all of these lost episodes are fake" or "this is creepypasta, so it is probably fake", I am not lying. Yes, it may be a creepypasta, but it is still true. Thank you for taking your time to read of my horrible experience.

(PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS IS ACTUALLY FAKE...)"

There's honestly no point in going on and on about how true a story is (we're supposed to suspend disbelief, and if we don't, we're not good readers) and even worse to then point out that it is fake. We know that the stories on this site are fake, but the goal is to pretend they are real while reading them, which would be what would make them scary. Reminding us that your story is ten times as true as someone else's breaks that thought process, and then noting that this is "ACTUALLY FAKE" is unnecessary. ~Pøi 13:18, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest this is deleted along with everything else in the "lost episode genocide". the bad ones are the ones that can die in a fire. Awikicontributer 22:11, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

It's not bad, but Peppa Pig? Seriously? Hellur chap, wanna hear a creepy story??? 17:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Its OK but it's not the best. Whats Peppa Pig anyway?!?!?! MurderaTheEevee 20:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC) This Is My Signiture Obey It MurderaTheEevee 20:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

My opinion

This is just cliche beyond belief. I say we fix this. Not punishable by delete, but nonetheless... "A child's rhyme stuck in my head, it said that life is but a dream..." 22:18, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

--I let go and fall deeper. This will be the end of me. 01:51, May 13, 2012 (UTC)