This wasn't too bad... but it sounds a bit fake; creepy pastas should seem realistic.  No legend about the tone suggests a seizure immediately after the tone is heard (or none that I've ever seen).  It was written well, though.  It surely tells a story.  We never know, this may be real.  My heart goes out to all of those who have real tragedies such as this.  Talaith the Martyr (talk) 22:08, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, joy. Another Lavender Town Pokepasta. Two paragraphs in I lost interest... Whizzmaster 19:46, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I thought it was good. While the whole Lavender Town idea is a bit overused, it was well written :3

I did notice that you said Charizard flew you to Lavender Town, though; Charizard can't use Fly in RBY. Flameof1000Worlds 20:47, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

This was pretty well written. AvalancheO 20:18, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nice to see from the opening paragraph that you dont take creepypastas seriously.

Fluttershyisepic (talk) 14:30, January 27, 2013 (UTC)Fluttershyisepic

This was sad

It made me cry, sorry for your loss. :( SirPrinceGumball 07:10, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

My name is Daniel Pox. It is my code name, yes, and I am a paranormal investigator. Can you email me more facts about this tragedy at shin@goodprotein.net it is my email.

Danielpox 03:28, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

@Danielpox and mapsal313 in the opening paragraph he makes it clear that he does not belive in creepypastas

Fluttershyisepic (talk) 14:30, January 27, 2013 (UTC)Fluttershyisepic

Is this real? I've been looking into the stories about Lavender Tow nand I wanna know if they are actually real. If this story is real I'm sorry for you're loss

i'm sorry for your your friend... Mapsal313 16:32, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

are you kidding me?? no it is not real!!! if it were real it wouldnt have such stupid, specific dialogue!!

FAIL. Charlieiii64 04:52, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's fake....

Charizard cannot learn fly in Pokemon Blue or Red. See this