This wasn't too bad... but it sounds a bit fake; creepy pastas should seem realistic. No legend about the tone suggests a seizure immediately after the tone is heard (or none that I've ever seen). It was written well, though. It surely tells a story. We never know, this may be real. My heart goes out to all of those who have real tragedies such as this. Talaith the Martyr (talk) 22:08, April 23, 2013 (UTC)
Oh, joy. Another Lavender Town Pokepasta. Two paragraphs in I lost interest... Whizzmaster 19:46, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, I thought it was good. While the whole Lavender Town idea is a bit overused, it was well written :3
I did notice that you said Charizard flew you to Lavender Town, though; Charizard can't use Fly in RBY. Flameof1000Worlds 20:47, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
This was pretty well written. AvalancheO 20:18, April 5, 2012 (UTC)
Nice to see from the opening paragraph that you dont take creepypastas seriously.
This was sad
It made me cry, sorry for your loss. :( SirPrinceGumball 07:10, April 16, 2012 (UTC)
My name is Daniel Pox. It is my code name, yes, and I am a paranormal investigator. Can you email me more facts about this tragedy at firstname.lastname@example.org it is my email.
Danielpox 03:28, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
@Danielpox and mapsal313 in the opening paragraph he makes it clear that he does not belive in creepypastas
Is this real? I've been looking into the stories about Lavender Tow nand I wanna know if they are actually real. If this story is real I'm sorry for you're loss
i'm sorry for your your friend... Mapsal313 16:32, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
are you kidding me?? no it is not real!!! if it were real it wouldnt have such stupid, specific dialogue!!
FAIL. Charlieiii64 04:52, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
Charizard cannot learn fly in Pokemon Blue or Red. See this