Discuss. The picture has always scared the crap out of me, and the first portion of the pasta wasn't bad. But the rest of it felt a little tacked on. The fight descriptions got a bit tedious, and the latter chunk just didn't seem all that scary. Not to mention the editing, it's hard to read a story when it's interrupted mid-sentence every other line. Started off better than it finished, I'd say focus more on things like the first portion. FRay 09:44, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

oh, god, that thing has a name?? aaanyway, the first part was good, the second one was okay-ish... i got mixed up with all the line breaks and some wrong grammar and spelling. could you fix it, please? it's a cool story. "I have not...come this far...to die now." -Nick 10:35, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

next time don't type it in notepad and copy it over here, use word or something Gedet 13:40, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Needs moar paragraph. AlixeTiir the herpa-derpa-durr 23:44, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, straightened that out. Sweet Clyde that's a long story.

I love how it is called Jeff, Yet the picture suggests it is a girl.. Revenge v Pro 17:21, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

What a twist. ChromeWolf 03:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

uhh what? Michael haze 22:58, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

jesus christ who the hell foresaw this This signiature is cake 02:02, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

I've been wanting to ask... What kind of a name is Liu anyway?

It's a fairly common chinese name. The original spelling of the name is 劉. - Tehtumpi 17:30, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Contents 1 Jeff is Awesome! 2 Nice story :D 3 Finally My Question is answered 4 Not great 5 This picture used to scare me 6 Is it just me? 7 I know where the image comes from 8 ....Really? 9 Wtf 10 Name 11 Most Ridiculous Thing I Have Ever Read

Jeff is Awesome! Edit

--Kai Schrader 22:35, November 7, 2011 (UTC) {C {C I actually think that Jeff the killer is beautiful he also seemed kinda sweet, you know, before the whole fight incident. I love this story so freaking much! I have read it like forty times and I still can't get enough of it!I do wish that I could meet Jeff in real life and tell him that he IS beautiful. <3 lolwut 7Rey 01:02, November 13, 2011 (UTC) OH GOD HOW DID THIS GET HERE I AM NOT GOOD AT WIKIS

lulwut

Nice story :D Edit

The scariest thing about this pasta is the picture (good god), which does spice it up. I wouldn't call it "scary", but it's a really awesome story.

Acidpop 23:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC) acidpop

Finally My Question is answered Edit

For like a long time I asked what was "Go To Sleep"? I looked everywhere on google for it. I didn't know he, or it had a name. Everytime that pic pops up it makes me jump. Tiff1234 00:29, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Not greatEdit

This story was crap to be honest, badly written and nothing all that special to it.

Darth Hendrix 03:15, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

This has never scared me. I've always grinned ear to ear (not quite, I'll get there some day!) and laughed right along. If he came for me, we would likely exchange maniacal laughter and I would die with a smile on my face.

Now, all we need is another kid who later wears a bat costume who confronts jeff when they grow up....But really

he reminds me of joker--Heavy17915123 14:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Retarded story. Tired of hearing about it. Bye Snazzell 23:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

This picture used to scare me Edit

USED to. Now that I've read the story, I understand who the creepy face in the picture is, and can sympathise with the character. Instead of being something nameless and creepy, I now have a name to match to the face. The unknown is the biggest fear, and knowing who that is supposed to be makes it far less creepy. Mdcowboy 05:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)Mdcowboy

not as scary as i thought

I think it's the fire that affected his mind as before he was set on fire jeff said whats so funny? showing that then he sainty. Well enough to say those words, but it could be perment brain damage caused by the pain killers. Obsidian Rocks 07:37, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me?Edit

Or does Jeff kinda look like the humanish version of Smile Dog? xD I mean I see a bit of a resemblance in terms of the smile and big scary face.

The story is pretty good by the way, I enjoyed it. ^.^ Just that I hate that goddamn picture. My friend posted it on my facebook wall once since she knows it scares the shit out of me. ItsUnoriginal 02:05, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I know where the image comes from Edit

It's a screencap from a scene in the surrealist David Lynch film "Inland Empire".
I can't believe than NO-ONE has pointed that out. - Tehtumpi 07:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it was good, the story is okay in my opinion. But please just avoid going from third to first person in some lines. Also the story takes a little twist so give more information about it. But all in all good story and also great picture.Markdraco12 22:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC) MarkDraco12

I always thought this face belonged to some sort of phantasm or some non-human creature. Good thing that the picture still unnerves me related to a childhood event, because the pasta completely removes anything scary. Alonzo Typer 09:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

A bit unrealistic. Kids with guns and knifes? Really?Pellyeve93 11:34, March 18, 2012 (UTC) Hungary Turtles for life.

From ZeroLifePlus,

( bit unrealistic. Kids with guns and knifes? Really? )

umm i happen to be 14 and there were 3 deaths in the last few

years from kids with guns and knifes to other kids. there are also

kids my age bringing shit like that to school lol

....Really? Edit

As much as I love the characters and stuff ( Even though I hate those thugs Randy, Troy and Keith >:| ), I expected more from the pasta. A lot more. It's actually pretty awful if you ask me. I found a rewritten version on DeviantART, and I think many would prefer it. If so, can I replace the crappy old version with the Rewritten one?

Thanks! Smileinabiscuitlegsbeatmeinabox is my name. FEAR ME AND SPREAD THE WORD! 22:30, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

lolno     Contr        KOROMO        Talk      22:51, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wtf Edit

So THAT'S how the joker got those scars.

Name Edit

Would it help if I pointed out if pointed out that because "the" isn't an active word, it need not be capitalised and therefore the correct title for this article is "Jeff the Killer". However, may I point out I found the whole story extremely entertaining and I reckon it would be very useful as a bedtime story.--Launchballer 21:30, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

The only Creepypasta that prevents me from sleeping. O~O

Most Ridiculous Thing I Have Ever Read Edit

I want to walk you through my thoughts as I read this: First thing I see, horrible title, a newspaper wouldn't pick something catchier? Whatever. Alright, so I keep reading, and that wasn't so bad, pretty okay creepypasta. Oh, there's more? Expositon, exposition...wait, what? The action movie brawl isn't scary to begin with, but you're telling me these kids are 11 and 12? You have GOT to be joking. Well, the cops sure are taking things seriously, if they're threatening to shoot a kid armed only with a pocketknife who's nowhere near them. Okay, so, the kid was just taken off to juvie, no trial, no forensics, no arguments, no interrogation, what's more important is what the family wears to some brat's birthday party? Best. Parents. EVER. I'd be really sad if they died. Oh Lord, Round 2: The kiddies have guns this time! And the strength to throw people like ragdolls! Where is everyone, anyway, is there no one in the house? Oh, they're just watching, that's special. The fist stopped his heart, heh, what is this, Mortal Kombat? Hey, I think I saw this next part in Batman: The Animated Series. And the mother shows her good parenting skills again with a 12 second hospital visit. Meh, at least she showed up. And the cops aren't even going to bother, oddly enough, that is an increase in competence for them. Oh, now they're going to shoot him, that is exactly the logical way to handle a problem child. Well, I suppose it is when you gave birth to the bastard child of Superman and the Joker. So, Jeff is the killer, and he murdered his parents and brother in a ridiculously gory fashion. Didn't see THAT coming at all. The thing about the guy who was followed by blood everywhere he went until they shot him into space and it turned out that guy was me (and a lady if I am a lady) was scarier than this.Neo Bahamut 00:30, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Very scary but it got a liutttle hard to read IN THE MID POINT I think that next time just make it short and sweet like maybe 30 lines should do it but at the end of the day it is your article so do what you want to it cheers manMrbrosnan1 15:01, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I saw the picture before. I did not know what it was, but it shocked me (I yelled out, "Lawd! What girls look like without their makeup!"). Anyway, I'm very glad I read this - This is the best thing I've read all day.

EvraVon53 02:55, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

The picture is creepy. I will give it that.Neo Bahamut 03:10, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wow that was scary. Good article a little long but that is good. Keep up the good work. I love your article and I hope that Jeff does not come for me. Wow that article is scary. Good job though.YukiFushioshi84 12:05, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

picture:scary story:it's good but needs a bit of work... This is just my honest opinion.