Mostly well written, but I was a little put off by the fact that it relates to this website specifically. Also how Jeff talked directly to you. Other than that it was a decent read :) TheInfamousProject 22:34, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Ending made me jump :) Very good pasta, but the fact that Jeff can't even always spell "pleasant" right kind of turns down the scary. MeltingObject (talk) 11:06, August 30, 2012 (UTC)

Is it bad that the moosejuice part made me crack up laughing? I thought the story was really good! It really scared me untill the part with moosejuice in it. I got blocked because I "spamed my edits". Keep up the good work! :) DashingErwyne17 (talk) 07:48, September 14, 2012 (UTC)